How to Build a Planet by Poul Anderson & Stephen L. Gillett
Mar. 24th, 2026 08:57 am
A brief guide to creating plausible planets.
How to Build a Planet by Poul Anderson & Stephen L. Gillett

A post at Patricia Wrede’s blog: Advice–Take it or Leave it
I just finished beta-reading a book co-authored by Sherwood Smith and someone else, and added emphatically, “Or ignore all this if you prefer!” because that’s important. Just because I had a problem with a specific character and the role she played in the plot doesn’t mean everybody else in the universe will have that problem. No doubt lots won’t. The sentence-level comments will hopefully be helpful even if Sherwood throws away bigger-scale comments.
Patricia Wrede says:
One of my very early beta-readers had internalized a lot of writing “rules” he’d been taught for writing college essays. Like “never use passive voice.” He flagged proper uses of passive voice (“George, having been beaten up by thugs, barely made it to the hospital”), along with every correct use of the subjunctive (“If I were you, I wouldn’t do that”), and every perfectly fine progressive tense (“Janet was sitting in the library when Carol finally found her.”) [Can you tell that I’m still a bit peeved, even forty years later? I thanked him politely and ignored his advice.]
And that’s what the post is really about — ignoring advice.
I generally hesitate to make specific suggestions, personally. I’m a lot more likely to say, “This doesn’t work to me, here’s my reaction to this” than to say, “And maybe you could fix it by A, B, C.”
Patricia Wrede says, “Is this a description of a problem, or a recommendation for how to fix something?” If it’s a recommendation for how to fix something, or based on following some rule, translate it into an observation if you can. Then decide if it’s something you did on purpose, but it didn’t quite work (and now you have to figure out how to fix it your way), something that maybe needs tweaking, or something that’s a them-problem.
I think that comes from the same place. When someone makes a specific suggestion, pretty often it’s a solid suggestion, but sometimes it’s a reaction that tells me something didn’t work for that reader. Which is useful information!
Anyway … I honestly think an author needs BOTH the humility to accept good advice AND the confidence to ignore less-good advice, which means ALSO the judgment to tell which is which. Many hoops to jump through!

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