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katarina_tales has updated with my Advanced Composition story. Gasps!

And yes, I realize that it's really really bad. But it's a rough draft. Rough drafts are MEANT to be bad.

And theres a lot I need to put in there...poor Bittner! He should never give us a limitless assignment again! Ten pages and it STILL felt too short. Like, I really need to explain in there somewhere just why Jakob speaks German, and why thats so confusing for him. And I'd like to expand upon the tourture some, as I think that would be interesting, and there really were far too many words and not enough blood. And, of course, most of the first part needs to be totally re-written, as I had something completely different in mind when I started this story.

Ah well. Good stuff nontheless.

~Sor